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:iconcolormewonderful:
(I'm writing this with the knowledge that I'm not a pro but I thought maybe I might be able to help some)
I really like what you did with this. I think that having a ref really helps and if you practice more with refs at hand to glance at then your proportions and poses will become easier giving you great results like this. Keep studying and practicing hands as well cause I see that one needs a little work. I applaud the way you made the red pop from the background but maybe you could give the bg a little more definition to maybe understand where she's at. I love the detail you put into her face and upper body though I couldn't figure out where her other hand went. Some parts to her somewhat blur together so I'm not sure if that's what you were aiming for with rest being more vague so the attentions on her face. Careful about how you position the picture so that it doesn't cut off in certain places giving it an uneven look. Oh, and are those petals I see? Nicely done but if you had added more maybe it would have looked even better. So all in all, I think you did a great job and improved!
~Colorme ;]
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Thank you so much for writing this! I really appreciate it! :hug: I...don't mean to sound cheeky or ungrateful by saying this, but I didn't intend for her to have a background. It's just a colour with shadows, though I can totally understand how that's confusing, what with the stupid curtain hanging around for no reason ^^; I do agree it could have done with more definition, certainly. I'll try to put better subjectivity and thought into where I place characters next time, and also the composition of the whole piece! GAH, once again, thank you! :heart: :hug: You've been a huge help and I can't thank you enough~ :iconiluplz:

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:iconcolormewonderful:
Well I'm glad you took the critique with grace! I really hope I have helped like you've claimed, lol.
I figured she might be just floating in colors but I wasn't so sure because of the curtain and the shadows. So my last advice would be to balance those things out. ( You know what I mean? If she's in a place, give it definition. If she's just floating then give it less detail. ) So good job! Can't wait to see what you'll bring to the table next. Keep up the hard work! >D
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